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Sea urchins101's avatar

I love this poem

Rachael Diane ໒꒱'s avatar

I'm so glad you came across my work and were able to connect with it!! Thank you so much for reading ໒꒱

The Dre Diaries🔖's avatar

Beautiful.

Rachael Diane ໒꒱'s avatar

Aww that means so much! Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read my work ໒꒱

Lauren's avatar

I love the rhythm here!

Rachael Diane ໒꒱'s avatar

Thank you so much for reading! It's really appreciated <3

⊱❀ hana ❀⊰'s avatar

"no child's too child to hold doubt in their prayer" GIRLLLLL 😭😭😭😭

Taylor Alex's avatar

So sad and so true! Beautiful.

Rachael Diane ໒꒱'s avatar

Thank you so much for reading!! It really is a topic that I feel like everyone can relate to in some way, whether from reflecting on their own experiences as a child or from knowing a child currently in their life.

Vanessa Leah's avatar

This is a beautiful piece! You’ve used a gentle rhythm to speak about something very real. I couldn’t agree more. Children are the compass to the healing humanity is so desperately seeking. They know and feel the truth. 🙏🏽

Rachael Diane ໒꒱'s avatar

You expressed my thoughts exactly! Thank you so much for taking time out of your day to read and interact with my work. It means the world to me ໒꒱

Aliwritesherlife's avatar

This is awesome 👏🏻 you can really feel the emotion. Keep up the good work!!!!

Tsetsy's avatar

Children sense everything, even when adults try to cover it up with "care."

Rachael Diane ໒꒱'s avatar

We truly underestimate them too much! They see things we can't even see for ourselves.

Marisa Maria's avatar

love this!!

Rachael Diane ໒꒱'s avatar

You're amazing! Your time and attention means more than you know! Thank you for reading ໒꒱